i suppose that if the fragment is smoother than the whole then the poem is defective as a mode of collage, that it loses its texture and musicality, and it ends up like LLM: frictionless micro fascisms.
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i suppose that if the fragment is smoother than the whole then the poem is defective as a mode of collage, that it loses its texture and musicality, and it ends up like LLM: frictionless micro fascisms.
Edited poem that gemini threw out in response to something
Leo
after Appolinaire
crorn by wing
and eyes – agate chips
turned dark in in skies
reflecting – agate blue
or eflectinging or shadowed canyon floors
desert heat on music and bone
an
his sculpted wildiness
https://www.wikiart.org/en/michelangelo/studies-of-grotesques-1530
when i write it mostly opportunistic. here, i tried to spin the ‘world’ into harmonic distortion with the v in ‘versions’: and that is clearly what happens for some readers, even if it’s just me
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Frost lining in two plastic cups,
what’s going on’s history, scenic
potential to a fall into the world,
an underneath this paving stone:
versions that I love.