A few doubts?
If this were art it would be like a “miracle”1, ahead of itself like a fuse… think “with the things as they exist”2. Resist “the lyrical interference of the ego”3. In an “emotional complex”4, in the instant, as in all his America. I took care, and the form it took. Sneezed; a drink helps. Four names, for one, equivalent.
1. Should begin, with the first, that is the end of progress as “Echoic”5 flourish. What else?
What further felicity?
2. You may try too hard or too little, equated as the above, dreamt, that is woken into a dream. To approach it, to have that as your practice, that’s the anti-figurative certified as figurative.
Its opposite would be art. As “radical art” is a “swerve”6 from “figurative certified as anti-figurative”6.
3. The movement, of poetry works: “phrase against phrase”6; “the HEART, by way of the BREATH, to the LINE”7; or “a matter of the energies of words”8.
There’s no sense of the poetic, having those three superposed upon syllables.
4. Music bore its “crisis”9 in a composition which involves every aspect of the material in a whole whose language cannot refer directly to life, without alienation of content and expression. Thus, it is neither narcissistically “infantile” nor “outdated”9, as the other arts are, but ripe for overcoming. So poetry need not be art, if written with noise, music’s meaningless antithesis, as its catalyst.
Poets clarify “the temporal and eternal questions”10: verse is meaningless when embodying resolution. Thus, if a single detail bears the full dynamic and shifting weight of an Image, it enacts meaninglessness. So, if a juxtaposed element embodies its restless energy, while another does its energetic rest, then the poem’s phrasing is neither, is not musical, and, if wed instead to meaninglessness, closure, like noise!
Until used up!
1. Hilary Putnam on scientific anti-realism
2. Zukofsky in An Objective
3. Olson in Projective verse
4. Pound in A Few Don’ts by an Imagiste
5. Michael Palmer
6. Bernstein in Perfect Pitch
7. Olson in Projective Verse
8. Zukofsky to Monroe on the Objectivist movement
9. Debord in “Why Lettrism?”
10. Ibsen in The Task of the Poet