Trying to trivialise my naive theorising a little more I got the following conclusion:
a rough texture in a smooth open tone. e.g.
Yap
They glance back at stunned
small plant, embraced
midstreet with no tending
just “thank you”,
fingers still in plastic wrap,
her set to permission.
One good thing with that is you can do it imitating others. So: who do I imitate?